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| What makes you say that? ![]() Joined: Dec 2003
Bike: 2002 Bandit 1200 S
Location: St. Cloud, MN, USA
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| I've only been serious about photography for a year now, though I've had classes dating back to the early 90's. By word of mouth I was asked to shoot the staff of a local abstract company, about 36 people, mostly women. I took the job at a cut rate just to get the experience. I have little interest in portraiture, but it's a good exercise in lighting and subject management. I won't post any of those shots, but I think they came out well. Jolene assisted me and did a wonderful job. She's encouraged me to take some of the family sessions I'm getting asked for. Maybe I will. So, this week I became focused on my portrait post-processing. Here's one of my lovely assistant and wife through ten years and two children. I've done some skin work since the poor girl suffers from adult acne and scars from her teen years. Please take a look and let me know if anything looks unnatural or odd. I know the lighting's not great, but I'm working on that, too, and my budget is limited. Thanks for looking.
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| Cool. I don't know much about photography but I know they always tell me to turn my head slightly and bring my chin down. I guess that improves the pic with the lighting, shadows and stuff. Great job. You mentioned the face acne. Here's a little story. Back in 2005 I was dating this seriously fine chic. She was 25 then. And she had fairly significant acne scaring on both cheeks. It bothered her. But it didn't bother me. It may sound funny but to me it was a part of her. It was a part of who she was and how I knew her. And she was so dang sexy. It's almost as if to take the scars away would be, well, less of her. So after we broke up, every once in a while I'd see a beautiful woman with some acne scaring and my heart would skip a beat cause it took me back to the thought of that girl. Men often think different than women but they don't quite realize it. |
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| Antebellum Mod ![]() Joined: Jul 2005
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| Hmm, she doesn't look blind. I have some suggestions but they'll have to wait till I have more time. Over all not bad I can't tell thet the skin has been touched up.
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| What makes you say that? ![]() Joined: Dec 2003
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| I meant to write a bit about that. I don't even see her scars. I've loved her since I was 17 years old, and to me it doesn't even exist. Of course, she doesn't feel that way. Edit: Thanks, Don. I'm all ears.
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| Refrigerator Magnet Test Engineer ![]() Joined: Oct 2006
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| Clint, great pic. It's also great that you've got a good "teacher" here. Lighting can really make the difference but can get expensive if you start going after what you think is ideal. I work with a lot of photographers but I would hate to even think about all the investments they had to make.
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| What makes you say that? ![]() Joined: Dec 2003
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| Hehe. She's 3 months younger than me. We're 34.
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| What makes you say that? ![]() Joined: Dec 2003
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| Thanks!
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| I've said it before after looking at some of your other photo's, you've missed your calling. Very few people have a natural eye for photography, IMO you do, so if you enjoy it stick with it.
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Ok I have a few minutes, obviously there is nothing wrong with this portrait, and a lot of what I see that I’d do different is a mater of personal preference. Photography is very subjective. First the background while it is not distracting it doesn’t add to the photo. Try to use contrasting colors and stay away from colors that blend in with the subject. Go to the fabric store and pick up some black muslin or velvet and some white muslin. I use these colors more than any other, they have great contrast. The lighting is almost too even, did you use some sort of soften filter on it? The light that is cast on her hair and in her eyes could be sharper and brighter. The light in her eyes looks defused and that makes her eyes look a little dull. Combine the defused look of the light with the gray background and the photo looses some of its eye-catching quality. As I was just finishing this up I checked the photo out on another PC... Disregard all but the background comments, now to adjust my monitor.
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{intimid8er rummages around.....looking for anything unnatural or odd} Nope. Only thing I find unnatural or odd is such a beautiful looking lady is still with your raggedy self! {ducks.....runs}
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| What makes you say that? ![]() Joined: Dec 2003
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| LOL @ Tim. Yeah, yeah. You're right, Don. My background is gray paper. It's all I own right now. I got damn lucky with the shoot wednesday when my contact at the office supplied a roll of blue fabric. In hindsight, my gray would've been really bland. Whew! I shoot at home in a small room with unfinished drywall. I used a hotshoe flash mounted on a cheap tripod and a white umbrella. It's not a bad setup for what I spent, but I need to work on model and light position. This was from one of my very first attempts.
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